peeper :) Report post Posted June 10, 2006 There are many a PK'r in EL Who plan on sending you straight to Hell You wake up in the Morning Without a slight Warning A Pk'r has bid you Farewell There are many a Mod in EL Who will mute you if you behave Unwell They send you to 12345 You might as well be buried Alive Because you feel Like you're in Hell There is many a Bot in EL Like prattler who has a storly to Tell UobeyUok makes you Cry Corpus makes you die Or you can win big with Tinkerbelle That's my Poem Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
peeper :) Report post Posted June 10, 2006 i'd like some feedback (writing poetry and wanna test myself) (keep inmind i'm only 13) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tempest Report post Posted June 11, 2006 Peeper's nice poem why do u write poems about pkers? write about me the evil doer HackyJo xD but nice poem, really nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Knuckles Report post Posted June 11, 2006 I like it. Nice poem p33p3r Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
peeper :) Report post Posted June 13, 2006 i just wrote about PK'rs because.. i felt like it more feedback please Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sistema Report post Posted June 13, 2006 There is no hell in EL, only an underworld, LOL! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
peeper :) Report post Posted June 13, 2006 i had to find a rhyme Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Fox Lupine Report post Posted June 15, 2006 I liked it Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thelethalmoo Report post Posted June 16, 2006 i liked it to and i 4got what UobeyUok dose Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaer Report post Posted June 17, 2006 lmao "if you act unwell" - pro grammar isnt bad for a first effort , especially considering your age Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
maximos Report post Posted June 26, 2006 (edited) I'm 14 and don't even dare to spell that sort of grammar good poem if you look past the grammar issues though EDIT: my typos, I'm only 14 remember Edited June 26, 2006 by maximos Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sabu Report post Posted July 17, 2006 I'm 14 and don't even dare to spell that sort of grammar good poem if you look past the grammar issues though EDIT: my typos, I'm only 14 remember Well then you must be Dislexic, Cool poem though Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
guidera Report post Posted July 17, 2006 I'm also 13 but me can't...doesn't...talked...wording...good? grammar? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
peeper :) Report post Posted July 17, 2006 lol, grammar you talk good is very, why speak like yoda i do? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
