Spelling And Grammar Errors

[(Athosino)]

Pickaxe - Used for mining various ore (damage: 5-15, accuracy -5, defense -5, critical to hit -5, critical damage+1)

The ')' is missing.

[The_Piper]

Pickaxe - Used for mining various ore (damage: 5-15, accuracy -5, defense -5, critical to hit -5, critical damage+1)

The ')' is missing.

Aem, and a logical error. A pickaxe is not only used to mine ORES but too to harvest CHRYSTALS and GEMS.

 

And its a nice and cheap weapon too.

 

So why not write only "Used for mining (damage:..."

 

Piper

[Cicero]

Pickaxe - Used for mining various ore (damage: 5-15, accuracy -5, defense -5, critical to hit -5, critical damage+1)

The ')' is missing.

Fixed.

[iostr]

"Can't initiate combat, path too target too long!"

[Placid]

"You can't join a guild, while you are in some other guild."

 

Bad grammar, I suggest something similar to the following:

"You can't join a guild while you are a member of <X_GUILD>"

"You can't join another guild! You are already in [ONE,X_GUILD]"

[Dingar]

"You can't join a guild, while you are in some other guild."

The grammar is actually fine in that sentence, it's the comma that needs to go.

[Placid]

"You can't join a guild, while you are in some other guild."

The grammar is actually fine in that sentence, it's the comma that needs to go.

I highly disagree.

 

Anyway: Your Leather Boots has been destroyed.

Your Leather Boots have been destroyed?

[Shouja]

When I first started the game and saw the Rules, I saw two mistakes:

 

Rule 2. "prophanity" should be "profanity"

Rule 19. "publically" should be "publicly"

 

 

~Shouja~

Edited February 1, 2005 by Shouja

[Leeloo]

Anyway: Your Leather Boots has been destroyed.

Your Leather Boots have been destroyed?

This would also give:

 

Your sword have been destroyed

Your cape have been destroyed

 

Which is best?

Your $ITEM has been destroyed

- or -

Your $ITEM have been destroyed.

[TimeViewer]

Lord Luxin - Job - the word maritimal is used maritime is the proper word. Maritimal is not a real word, you may have been thinking of the word nautical.

 

Time

[TimeViewer]

Wine Quest

 

Bais - Latis' father (end of quest) - I'll go and tell Latis all he wants to know about hsi father.

 

hsi should be his

 

Time

[Lotharion]

Not sure whether this belongs here but:

 

"You finished researching Titanium Molding: Titanium Molding allows you to melt the iron and convert it to various objects, such as weapons and armors."

 

It seems a bit odd that it mentions you can henceforth melt and mold the iron in stead of titanium, which i would have expected.

 

maybe also better "convert into"

 

"convert to" sounds so religious :-)

 

Loth

Edited February 3, 2005 by Lotharion

[Alox]

You finished researching Shields Construction: General information on how to build varios types of shields. Allows you to research Iron Shield and Steel Shield

[TimeViewer]

In the encyclopedia both the title and description you have listed as Iron Cuisses the word is suppose to be Cuirasses

 

Time

[Acelon]

When entering the meeting hall's balcony in mage convent, it says metting hall

[Guest Gatito_Loco]

In your storage, they're (excavator, monster magnetism, etc.) cloaks. In your inventory, they're capes. I don't know what they are at the NPCs. (In the encyclopedia, they're cloaks.)

Edited February 28, 2005 by Gatito_Loco

[Specter]

Morumi when talking about his ship wreck says "most of the people on our SHOP lost their lives"

[freeone3000]

#ci returns: You are on the channel #1, and there are currently 21 players on the channel.

[Choris]

Combat Tactics book:

The study of combat, both offense and defense, as well as weak points and other usefull information.

Should be useful.

[Guest Dgar]

Harvy

 

We are short on quartz, sulphur, and mercuriy, so if you have any to sell I'll gladly buy it.

[Captain_Smile]

46 Rat Tail

 

Tails ?

[The_Piper]

If you try to read a book like foot armor, leg armor and so on, you get a message like "You must first read basic armor construction".

 

The book Dan sells is named "general armor".

 

Piper

[LaNora]

i dont care if the storage guy calls me a piece of shit, but if s/he is gonna call me that it needs to be spelled right

("you don't have that item you pice of shit)

 

 

:lol: :lol: :lol:

[The_Piper]

If you try to read Advanced Alchemy book without knowledge you get the message:

 

You need to have the following knowledge 'Biochemistry' 'Botanics' before researching Advanced Alchemy.

 

By clicking on Biochemistry you get the message:

 

You need to have the following knowledge 'Biology' before researching Biochemistry.

 

I would guess, Botanics is a little bit wrong.

Piper

[The_Piper]

I didnt know that there are planets in this game

 

Go from WS to MM and it says, "Welcome to Morcraven Marsm"

 

Piper