Storm_Shadow Report post Posted January 12, 2008 Way to leave us hangin on there man. I can't wait for the next chapter! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cajun Report post Posted January 13, 2008 way to keep us frustrated with the cliff-hangers! ! Yeah the story is coming along great, cant wait to read more and more! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Samy_Navilian Report post Posted January 13, 2008 OMG! Paul its alone with the Sslessar's!!! I'm not there to help him... Awesome! i really cant wait to see the next chapter!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DibClark Report post Posted January 13, 2008 i must say that you're letting a lot of my "secrets" out, paul Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Andalan Report post Posted January 13, 2008 Hehe, I think it's so obvious how the story will continue... I like it nonetheless :-) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Pride Report post Posted January 14, 2008 nOOOOoooo ;_; when i saw you were the latest poster i thought there was a new chapter rofl xD keep up the great work Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Pride Report post Posted January 14, 2008 yay \o/ i jsut finished the chapter though ;_; keep it up xD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JimP Report post Posted January 14, 2008 So now you have a goddess on your side Paul?!?! Nice! =) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ShoDoKaN Report post Posted January 14, 2008 paulB's future fiance?? excellent chapter keep up the great work Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Storm_Shadow Report post Posted January 14, 2008 Love it. I think this is my favorite chapter yet XD. Comparing my magic skill to unolas did wonders for the ego. I ca hardly wait till the next one..You've gained an extra fan/character/fanatic lol. Good work and you have talent. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PaulB Report post Posted January 14, 2008 Thanks to all that left me comments again! I figured I would give you all a break from the cliffhangers I love to leave you with. But be warned more will follow hehe. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aphistolas Report post Posted January 14, 2008 (I'm not much for reviewing, Enly's much better at that, but this story caught my attention.) Interesting storyline, Paul. It's cool you're including peoples in-game names, that's usually quite difficult to do (from a RP POV). Although, if you could do a grammar check once in awhile it would improve this piece, in my opinion. Well done on getting this far though, I struggle with consistency a lot Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Samy_Navilian Report post Posted January 14, 2008 (edited) What can i said?!?!... ...AWESOME!!! Go Paul! Go Paul! Go! Edited January 14, 2008 by Samy_Navilian Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Enly Report post Posted January 15, 2008 Interesting story Paul, I could offer some corrections here and there, however people seem to be enjoying it as is, and that is the main purpose of a story no? So I'll keep away I'd say its a job well done since people seem to like it quite a bit Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Samy_Navilian Report post Posted January 15, 2008 Keep the good work Paul! Go Paul! Go Paul! Go! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kaGen Report post Posted January 15, 2008 (edited) KaGen summoned different creatures to kill the local pain-in-the-ass wildlife that came from the Kyriban Marsh. Just doing my civic duty sir! ~kGn Edited January 15, 2008 by kaGen Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Samy_Navilian Report post Posted January 16, 2008 uhhh... I cant wait to see what is coming in the next chapter... Great Paul Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Pride Report post Posted January 16, 2008 Storm Shadow sat at the local tavern in Portland drinking a big mug of wine. He was deep in thought. Word had come from his great ally Swordofflame that Mortos brought trouble that was headed this way from the lands of Irilion. He trusted the word from Swordofflame too. Many times had he avoided the dangers from Mortos and Selain because of him. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JimP Report post Posted January 16, 2008 Hahahaaaaa but what about the Hobbits Paul? and does the DoA guild know about SECOND breakfast? Lunch? Supper?Dinner? LOL Is this story starting to feel like 'The Lord of the Rings' or what?!?! It's comming along great Paul... loving every chapter! I got home finally, and I got to read 2 chapters in a row. =) Keep 'em comming!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shadeslayer Report post Posted January 16, 2008 in-game name:ShadeSlayer main skill:Attack/defence, Magic Favorate map/maps: Nordcan, Southern Kilaran Love the story btw cant wait to see what happens Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Pride Report post Posted January 16, 2008 can't wait for the next chapters tommorow xD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shadeslayer Report post Posted January 16, 2008 woot, awesome chapter Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PaulB Report post Posted January 16, 2008 woot, awesome chapter TYVM I am glad you enjoyed it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Samy_Navilian Report post Posted January 16, 2008 Another great chapter! Keep the great work Paul! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheSpread Report post Posted January 16, 2008 Still absolutely loving this story Paul - good job Especially liked the Dawench/toadstools bit Keep it up and keep the chapters coming Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
