the northern lands

[sirrobin]

In the southern lands were the winds shriek

Bitter cold always as winters cheek

The wolves howl at the moon

Hoping winter shall end soon

But in the southern lands its always snow

And a place where people seldom go!

But one race can survive

There mammoth tents flapping in the breeze

Unlike us in the cold they do not cough and wheeze

For they are the giants of midgard

Seldom told in tales by the odd bard

 

-Sirrobin

Edited November 23, 2005 by sirrobin

[Dark_Nightmare]

Good, but unfortunately no place in Drai is far north enough to have snow ): So far the farthest places north are places like Tarsengaard and Idaloran. Eventually we will have places that will relate to this poem. Good work Work on Grammer and

Spelling please

[Derin]

Nice poem, if you just change north to south it can fit the icy lands of southern Irilion

[sirrobin]

Done

[Brom]

Edit your topic name too.

 

In the southern lands were the winds shreik

Bitter cold always as winters cheek

The wolves howl at the moon

Hoping winter shall end soon

But in the southern lands its always snow

And a place where people seldom go!

But one race can survive

There mammoth tents flapping in the breeze

Unlike us in the cold they do not cough and weeze

For they are the giants of midgard

Seldom told in tales by the odd bard

-Sirrobin

 

Edited mamoth to mammoth another northern to southern and howle to howl The last one is up to you, There might be another spelling.