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you see yourself standing before a great crowd of warriors,mages, and archers. they seem to be getting ready to fight something. after a while u see a great army of armed and regular goblins coming towards the worriors. one man is riding a horse leading the humans and elves. u recognize him as your dad.

 

the humans and elves fight bravely and boldly, your dad killing the most goblins. u see one goblin which is one of

the strongest ones u noticed charge at your dad. when the little match between your dad and the goblin is over u see your dad dead on the ground.

 

you cry tears and sit there until the battle is moved over to where your sitting. your dads best friend and an ally comes over to u and tells u to run home. after a couple of more minutes of standing in the battle u try to run home to tell your mother but when u turn the other way u see a goblin with a wooden hammer. the last thing u remember of that time is when the goblin hit u. then once u wake up u find your self in the battle field u see dead bodies. u decided to go home.

 

once u opened the door to your house tears came to your eyes. your mother was dead and u say the same wooden hammer that knocked u out. so from then on u trained with your training equipment your dad gave u and once your were strong enough for the real swords u took your dads weapons but then once when u were training on deers by a cliff a rock fell on your head and knocked u out. then u remember being by the wraith in isla prima.

 

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what do u think? be honest cause i don't want any lies i really want a better past then the space guy one

 

i tried my best to edit it so u can understand don't blame me i was in a hurry

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to what story are you refering here? (the one you tried to inprove I mean?)

 

Jez

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the quest lasud gives u after i finished it i hated the past it told me i mean a artraunaut just losing his memory and coming to a small moon named draia thats just like the anceint times thats not a good story

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I don't understand what you're saying wildbeast, are you suggesting that the NPC be changed? or are you just presenting this as your personal past for just your character?

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im saying that it should be a different past i didn't like the one it showed me so i made my own but if also im thinking of coming up with new ideas and they can be different for everyone like its random they're picked out randomly

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Well if you don't like that past, you don't have to make it yours :pickaxe: you can just write your own as you kinda did already.

 

As for your mention of it randomly picking pasts, it would be interesting if the NPC didn't give everyone the exact same past story. Perhaps different variations of the sci-fi one? different perspectives of the same scene picked at random.

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im saying that it should be a different past i didn't like the one it showed me so i made my own but if also im thinking of coming up with new ideas and they can be different for everyone like its random they're picked out randomly

 

 

Altho I like the idea of everyone having a different past (as we all do anyways) I dont see that the history of Draia can be changed. We cannot change history..

And, to be honest, I dont understand much of the story you presented, could be the way it was written, I dont know, but it didnt make sense to me.

 

Just my opinion tho..

 

Jez

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If you were going to write a story to post, whether it be personal or not, make sure you use proper grammar and a spell checker. I can barely read your 'past' :)

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If you were going to write a story to post, whether it be personal or not, make sure you use proper grammar and a spell checker. I can barely read your 'past' :)

 

 

THAT must have been it..:P

 

Jez

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We already tried to change the past quest to make your past more open for you to develop. It was denied

 

 

Basically, just look at Atekel as full of it, and she doesn't know anything about looking into the past. Stupid dwarf :)

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Stupid dwarf :)

 

 

erm..dwarves aint stupid just coz they have less room for brains..!

 

Jez

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We already tried to change the past quest to make your past more open for you to develop. It was denied

 

 

Basically, just look at Atekel as full of it, and she doesn't know anything about looking into the past. Stupid dwarf :P

 

 

um lol but dwarves arent stupid they just focus on other things alot like most dwarves(npc dwarves) r miners and blacksmiths they just focus on these :D and others like elves r archers because they live longer and see furthur :) and humans r worriors :icon13: but humans r evil too :mace: and some humans r ninjas :ph34r: (JUST WANTED TO ADD THE NINJA FACE)

 

aketel focused on understanding how magic works alot i mean i had a headache trying to understand what she said

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Ace isn't calling dwarves stupid I don't think, hes just saying that if you don't like the past you're told, choose to decide its not yours, and the person that told you just is a little touched in the head :)

 

Nor do you need to follow any stereotypes making your character a certain way just because thats what his race is supposed to be according to the public idea of fantasy, because the problem is everyone sees their version of fantasy races slightly different. Everybody has read different books, seen different movies, and played different games. You get to make your character what you want, and come up with whatever past you prefer, and you can let others do the same.

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