DibClark Report post Posted May 22, 2008 (edited) Hi all! My first attempt at doing some literary work... Here's a sample: The rains in Thelinor made the city look bleak, with all its gray stone walls. I went into the nearby empty stall, shaded from the rain, peering into the downpour for a sign of life inside the tavern. Seeing none, I decided to go inside anyway. My boots squished from being wet too long. The trip from Melinis where I was gathering a few rubies for a ring was uneventful. Funny how it is sunny in Melinis and stormy here, with only a cave route to separate the two places. Walking slowly, I adjusted my black cloak, hunching low, trying to avoid the stinging lashes of the rain. I reached the tavern door, pushed it in, and a hot, heavy gust of humid air greeted my cold, shivering skin... For the whole story (and its development), please click here. Commenting is not allowed on the story site, but you may add to this thread Happy reading! P.S. Following PaulB's example, if you want to be added to the story, drop a reply here, with your preferred character name, what you want to be in the story, and some other details you want to share. Edited July 15, 2009 by DibClark Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NuJac Report post Posted May 23, 2008 (edited) Great beginning. Cant wait to read more. be back soon..lol Edited May 23, 2008 by NuJac Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DibClark Report post Posted May 23, 2008 Five chapters already, as of this writing Added you too, my friend Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
spoonman Report post Posted May 27, 2008 great mini novel good job dib! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DibClark Report post Posted May 28, 2008 great mini novel good job dib! thanks a bunch! I'll fox you a copy of the whole story when completed Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
krisz_20 Report post Posted May 31, 2008 (edited) great mini novel good job dib! thanks a bunch! I'll fox you a copy of the whole story when completed If i were spoon, i will PK j00! hahahaha Kidding aside, i enjoyed reading it... good job, Dib **waiting for my part... still ** Edited May 31, 2008 by krisz_20 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Light Lan Report post Posted June 6, 2008 nice story, I enjoyed reading it Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DibClark Report post Posted June 6, 2008 nice story, I enjoyed reading it thank you very much. more to come!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DibClark Report post Posted November 4, 2008 Nine chapters done...tenth on the way.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
