Roja Report post Posted October 30, 2006 Gemlight Still Razia Crystal reflections dance in rings Murky water's movement sings The complementing blues of rock The curving pillar stones Far below the scented skies Here, the stony palace resides With silver walls shining With sturdy iron ramparts Though bridges lead to nowhere Though a million rats make it their lair The grandeur shall still endure Beloved caves live on, persist, prevail! For your treasures will never fade The shimmering of golden quartz In the name of Crystal Cave The sounds of still waters The shine of precious metals The fine crafted buildings Abandoned like a grave All live on, live on, persist Under the name of Crystal Cave Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aranka Report post Posted December 26, 2007 i can feel the magic, very good poem and nice use of images Share this post Link to post Share on other sites