Im bored so I wrote some songs

[Dmonik]

Alright tell me what you think

 

Someone I never Knew

 

(Verse 1) When I close my eyes I escape from the Pain.

I see the Darkness and go insane.

Your my angel from outside.

But your eyes are darker then mine.

You suck my life and breathe the dead.

And yet your voices won't get out of my head.

 

(Chorus) No matter what I think you control me. No matter what I see you blind me. No matter what I feel you deny me.

Just get out of my head.

 

(Verse 2) Your face is cold.

Your voice is sharp.

Your eyes are lurking as I fall apart.

You Send me out then pull me in.

And my head begins to spin.

 

(Chorus)

 

(Verse 3) The night grows cold and wind blows hard and your voice just rips me apart.

So I'm going to stop that which I can not see.

Then freedom will come it will come to me.

 

(Chorus)

 

(Verse 4) T creep up behind you to silence your enchanting voice.

But as I listen I get lost in it's chorus.

You spin around and then I see.

I see the fear inside of me.

 

(Chourus)

 

(Verse 5) You cage me up then throw away the key.

That's it bitch just get away from me.

 

(New Chorus) Your lies no longer bind me.

Your voice no longer blinds me.

My thoughts are mine and mine alond.

Stop that shit with your pleading tone.

And get the hell away from me.

Because your will is no longer my destiny.

 

(Verse 6) Now that I'm without you I see the things I once saw through.

Your voice is no longer my waking tune.

And I know things I never knew.

So take one step back because I no longer need you.

 

Next song is next post

[Dmonik]

Semi-Suicidal

 

(Chorus) I can't stand to watch you bleed so I close my eyes and pull the trigger.

Well I can't stand yo hear your scream so I cover my ears and pull the trigger.

And I can't stand this life anymore so I raise my gun and pull the trigger.

 

(Verse 1) This world makes no sense.

I'm confused and have no regrets.

So I wander this pointless life and watch the people I love die.

I have no more tears left to give.

So this is the end the end of it cause.

 

(Chorus)

 

(Verse 2) Your face it haunts me.

Your death it taunts me.

I cry alone cause I have no where left to go (now).

My family's all gone.

Some say my life is wrong.

But I can change yet theres not enough time for it cause.

 

(Chorus)

 

(Verse 3) My dreams aren't dreams, but nightmares.

My fears are long forgotten.

My hate is endless; and that's what scares me.

My pain is to much to live with.

My death will go unnoticed cause.

 

(Chorus)

 

(Verse 4) That's it no more.

I have nothing more left to live for.

So I raise my gun to my head; and then I remember you.

You gave me hope.

You made me believe.

Yet this bullet will set me free.

But then your death would have been in vain.

And that's whats causes so much pain.

 

Please let me know what you think of the lyric's of my songs ya I know they suck. Oh well

[Dmonik]

err is anyone going to reply?

[jjk]

im too lazy to reply sorry

[Killerlamb]

Are you Marylin Manson?

"ROCK IS DEADA DAN DEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAD"*head bangs*

[Dmonik]

actually its not rock lyrics its more punk well the second one is anyway the first i have no clue

[Erinaroa]

I could think of the first one being played in a punk style, the second one too. If it's alright with you could I write some music to go along with this and record it on the computer and send it to you, tell me what you think? And rock isnt dead, to tell you the truth it will never be dead, there will always be some form of rock out there.

[Wytter]

The first text sounded more like a rock/metal lyric to me, but the second one was a bit more punk-like in my head They're both good, but I prefer the first one :-)

 

And rock is not dead... It'll never die...

[Dmonik]

Erinaroa sure that'd be great glad you both like it thanks. Err not sure if u can get my email from profile if not pm me and ill get it to ya