Kayliana Report post Posted May 20, 2004 (edited) ... Edited May 8, 2019 by Kayliana Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lyanna Report post Posted May 21, 2004 Haha...did you clear this story with Di first, before writing it? Having said that, if you're trying to merge your style with Saii's, watch out for the way you make Satyr speak. You can use the formatting tricks that Saii used, and be careful of the usage of Olde English. Nice story, though. Probably will not put it in (though you can easily post it up on the GDC forums), but if I do, it'll definitely be under either Misc. (most likely) or Legends. A few minor typos here and there...I'll leave you to find them out yourself. :wink: -Lyn- Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lyanna Report post Posted September 3, 2004 Saved! -Lyn- Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
freeone3000 Report post Posted November 1, 2004 Lyanna, where did you find the typos? I couldn't find any. Approval of editor #1. And very interesting. Good job, Kayliana. Another story about dragons. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lyanna Report post Posted November 1, 2004 haha...that's why it's important to take breaks now and then, freeone, before attempting to proofread another story. Go slow. There's plenty of time. Try these sentences: All around her, tangling in her senses yet incredibly clear where the sounds of the forest. "Tiral, whatever distress thee so that thy great heart echoes so loudly within thy breast?" There are more. -Lyn- Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kayliana Report post Posted November 4, 2004 (edited) ... Edited May 8, 2019 by Kayliana Share this post Link to post Share on other sites