Glory and Honour(Application Story) in Stories Posted October 6, 2008 · Report reply Hi, It's a good story and you may have a chance at writing an official one if you'd like The replies you've gotten so far pretty much sum up everything I'd have to say. Just this small thing here I noticed: Tenarot laughed, a small tinny sound changed from the sonorous boom of the young Tenarot. This really isn't clear that it's his voice. Of course we learn that it's his voice and it's because he was wounded but you need to make it clear from the start what you're talking about. Thankee very much, yes that sentence reads very weird. Just the way it came out.