furzwei Report post Posted May 20, 2005 Word of the King It was a night when King Vermor went to kill Sir Edgar, the gargoyle. He took his sword and finished his word "I will be the one to tell more!" He went to his horse, which lagged out before his nose. so the king had to walk had nobody to talk, about getting his wife a black and red rose. He walked until Tyrnim where the city was burnin'. He wanted to meet Sir Edgar, the chief who wanted to kill him. King Vermor arrived but he lagged so he died. He end up in hell waiting for a spell to make his shoulder wide. The wraith heard his thought coming deep from the hot. Vermor's stats changed He felt so rearranged, went again to search for the spot. He killed the garg, but forgot to save That's the reason he moves in his grave. The exp he got disappeared like a bot who is a virtual slave. The next day he woke up an Ogre wanted to use him for hot dog. Vermor got the hit of the year losing the part of his ear falling unconscious on his dead rock. His eyes never opened again he simply decided to close them. The last word he said "get a needle and a thread" unfortunately got very forgotten. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Brom Report post Posted May 24, 2005 I like, but the last 2 stanzas could use some work The next day he woke up an Ogre wanted to use him for hot dog. does not quite match the rest of your rhyme scheme. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
