Morhwal Report post Posted February 20, 2008 (edited) BUMP Edited January 19, 2013 by Morhwal Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aranka Report post Posted February 21, 2008 (edited) well its not bad only watch out with tenses; sometimes I think a past tense would fit better (I walk outside of my house => I walked) and magnificently melancholy => magnificently melancholic i think I think writing/reading often is the key to get better at it, and nobody's perfect Edited February 21, 2008 by Melisande Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Morhwal Report post Posted February 26, 2008 well its not bad only watch out with tenses; sometimes I think a past tense would fit better (I walk outside of my house => I walked) and magnificently melancholy => magnificently melancholic i think I think writing/reading often is the key to get better at it, and nobody's perfect ohk ty. i made this for school too. XD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites