Borgfan Report post Posted December 24, 2003 I'm writing a story about a war bewtween the Elves and two other races. "Three black skinned orcs rushed two staff Elves, one Elf parried and brought it around to cave in the Orc’s skull, dropping it, while the other orcs both swung their axes diagonal at the other Elf." Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Borgfan Report post Posted December 24, 2003 Here's another quote: "At the very center of the city is a vast oak tree that never loses it’s leaves, no matter what the weather is and what season it is." Chapter 1 should be done tommarow or the 26th. I still need to work on the characters. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Report post Posted December 28, 2003 here's the first Chapter of the story: http://www.hostultra.com/~antip2pgraal/sto...tory/index.html the reason why i didnt finsish it two days ago is because i was adding to it and refining it. sorry for the complete and total icompetence of my host if it doesnt work or goes slow. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Borgfan Report post Posted December 28, 2003 here's the first Chapter of the story: http://www.hostultra.com/~antip2pgraal/sto...tory/index.html the reason why i didnt finsish it two days ago is because i was adding to it and refining it. sorry for the complete and total icompetence of my host if it doesnt work or goes slow. if u have any questions, PM me on forum or in the game, i'm Serafin. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Izzy Report post Posted December 28, 2003 wow that sucks... the link is down =(. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Borgfan Report post Posted December 29, 2003 sorry about that. That happens sometimes with my host's server. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Borgfan Report post Posted December 29, 2003 Because of the errors in it, I'm going to proofread it again. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Borgfan Report post Posted December 29, 2003 I put it back up. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Borgfan Report post Posted December 30, 2003 I'm not going to post the second Chapter. Why? Because I'm going to have the book published, and I don't want to ruin it for people who might read it after it gets published. I'm going to keep the first Chapter up. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites