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Morhwal

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well its not bad :)

 

only watch out with tenses; sometimes I think a past tense would fit better (I walk outside of my house => I walked)

 

and magnificently melancholy => magnificently melancholic i think

 

I think writing/reading often is the key to get better at it, and nobody's perfect :)

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well its not bad :hehe:

 

only watch out with tenses; sometimes I think a past tense would fit better (I walk outside of my house => I walked)

 

and magnificently melancholy => magnificently melancholic i think

 

I think writing/reading often is the key to get better at it, and nobody's perfect :evilgrin:

 

ohk :P ty. i made this for school too. XD

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