Brom Report post Posted November 2, 2005 (edited) The finished account of the Ocean Strider can now be read and re-read on http://www.eternal-lands.net/ !!! Thrilling tale that the roleplayers spun around the First voyage to Irilion! Click below http://www.eternal-lands.net/index.php?con...rp_oceanstrider It can also be found on the EL.net mainpage, RP Section. Thank you those who participated! Note: This is a heavily edited version so that all the posts make sense together. To read the full account with all of the Out of character and extra posts, Please read http://www.eternal-lands.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=17578 Happy Reading. Edited November 3, 2005 by Brom Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dark_Nightmare Report post Posted November 3, 2005 Don't want to be a pain in the rear, but Irilion is spelled with one "r". Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Brom Report post Posted November 3, 2005 Eh, it happens. I left both spellings in the story. My Rationale behind it being. "People pronounce it differently!" If it really bothers you all that much, I can change it in the story. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arnieman Report post Posted November 3, 2005 Eh, it happens. I left both spellings in the story. My Rationale behind it being. "People pronounce it differently!" If it really bothers you all that much, I can change it in the story. 216458[/snapback] There's a few other things I've found... such as "a elf", "a arrow", "Serdia", and some other things... just coming up with my own corrections, I'll post when I complete. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Brom Report post Posted November 3, 2005 Eh, it happens. I left both spellings in the story. My Rationale behind it being. "People pronounce it differently!" If it really bothers you all that much, I can change it in the story. 216458[/snapback] There's a few other things I've found... such as "a elf", "a arrow", "Serdia", and some other things... just coming up with my own corrections, I'll post when I complete. 216478[/snapback] Thanks! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LadyWolf Report post Posted November 3, 2005 Despite the minute mistakes that are still there I think Brom did a wonderful job compiling this. Let's not get nitpicky about the mistakes that are still there. Having assisted in the proofreading and spell checking, I know how difficult this project was. It is readable and a fine read it is. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arnieman Report post Posted November 3, 2005 Despite the minute mistakes that are still there I think Brom did a wonderful job compiling this. Let's not get nitpicky about the mistakes that are still there. Having assisted in the proofreading and spell checking, I know how difficult this project was. It is readable and a fine read it is. 216486[/snapback] Yes, he (and you) did a great job in the compilation of the work. BUT, there is a little difference in "nitpicking" and proofreading. I'm just throwing out a little proofreading (plus, some mistakes really bug me - one of the most mistake-proned sections was my own. Guess I need to proofread me a bit better). Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Brom Report post Posted November 3, 2005 (edited) Despite the minute mistakes that are still there I think Brom did a wonderful job compiling this. Let's not get nitpicky about the mistakes that are still there. Having assisted in the proofreading and spell checking, I know how difficult this project was. It is readable and a fine read it is. 216486[/snapback] Yes, he (and you) did a great job in the compilation of the work. BUT, there is a little difference in "nitpicking" and proofreading. I'm just throwing out a little proofreading (plus, some mistakes really bug me - one of the most mistake-proned sections was my own. Guess I need to proofread me a bit better). 216499[/snapback] He is right. I always enjoy extra eyes and literacy levels to check over the writing. I welcome your proofreading and editing. I think you know what I mean when I say "this was writen by a lot of different authors and styles. Thanks Atahn All of the Irrilons and Irillions are now fixed to Irilion. ;P Edited November 3, 2005 by Brom Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
