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Okay so these are the first draft of lyrics for a song I just started writing. I've got a full guitar part written for it too, but I haven't recorded it at all. I just wrote it all about an hour ago. This is mostly about my girlfriend, who keeps getting jealous and suspicious and paranoid. It's been making me upset and I figured I'd write a song about it. There's no title for it yet. Like I said, I just wrote this, so the lyrics aren't as good as they can be. Also, like all songs, it sounds a hundred times better with music. I'd appreciate any feedback at all, but you don't need to reply just to make me feel good about it if it sucks Thanks in advance You saw me looking backwards in this stormy-weathered light And though you'd do the same you can't admit that this is right We're still dancing on the edge of our mountain of words And we know just what to say to get by unhurt But you're not going down you're not going down No you're not going down you're not going down So you move away and then you say it was me all along You move away and then you, you you move away

Yeah I'll most likely write my own to make it more meaningful to me. I wish I had more free time to write songs but school is so tough this year that I'm really limited

Wow spock thats very very good! seriously thats amazing stuff Thx a bunch for the feedback! If you really don't mind I might use the words you used, if you dont want me to then I can try to model after what you did.

UGH! i just noticed i put "or" instead of "of" for "mountain of words" thx for the feedback enyo

Biggins! over-sized humans with a big appetite and amazing strength. Or just over-sized humans with the same qualities everybody else has. Vampires would be so tight, though. I vote vampires.

so true. so true.

I sit (sat) in my spot at the campfire...Idk if anyone even remembers it besides me.. But i sit there whenever I get online.

Thats great Shallara! I really like Broken Bonds (not just b/c of the name)

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ok here goes.. 1. Ten - Pearl Jam 2. Yield - Pearl Jam 3. Lost Dogs - Pearl Jam 4. Vs. - Pearl Jam 5. Riot Act - Pearl Jam 6. Vitalogy - Pearl Jam 7. Binaural - Pearl Jam thats all you need. lol just kidding! of course there are better albums than 2-7... I just don't really feel like going into the trouble of figureing out what to put. But Ten is imho the best rock album ever.

yea i got mine right the first time

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You could put me in, permanently AFK

it would be even spookier if we could use the old models I can't wait Berber this looks awesome!

Trop you rule!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that's gonna be SO flippin awesome I can't wait!

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All very good points. I guess I said PearlJam is the best cuz they're my favorite band and i'm inclined to say that but yeah they were at their best in the 90s. I guess we'll all just have to wait until I'm in my early 20's and my band at that time starts getting known nationally

I pretty much agree w/ what mikeh said... There are way too many emo bands that sound exactly the same. MCR isn't bad imo, but they're still not on my favorites list.. At least Pearl Jam is still around. Imho, they're the best rock band out there today. They're coming out w/ a new album soon that should be really really good.

edit....GRR i almost had it 1

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"You're a spy"

haha me too I've been in game so rarely that you should go ahead and take it.

yoshi makes the best avatars imho

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